Paragraph 2 - My Father or an Older Male Relative

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  1. When ever he comes to visit us, he brings me alot of stuff.

Whenever he comes to visit us, he brings me a lot of things.

  1. His eyes are brown, his hair is gray and his medium built.

His eyes are brown. His hair is gray, and he is medium-built.

  1. He was a good person who liked to help people, and He was patience with people.

He was a good person who liked to help people, and he was patient with people.

  1. My father is a straightforward person, he always give himself no concern about the judgement surrounding him.

My father is a straightforward person. He doesn’t care about what other people think.

Or

My father is a straightforward person. He is not concerned about what other people think.

  1. He is very friendly, funny, smart, and strict for almost every things.

He is very friendly, funny, smart, and strict with almost everything.

  1. He is have brown hair and light brown eyes.

He has brown hair and light brown eyes.

  1. Now he was a politician at my hometown.

Now he is a politician in my hometown.

  1. he work hard to take care with Family.

He works hard to take care of his family.

  1. He have 7 children.

He has seven children.

  1. He is a Friendly person and happy person and kind person.

He is a friendly, happy, and kind person.

  1. He is tall but I don’t know how much he weights.

He is tall, but I don’t know how much he weighs.

 

  1. He likes to do in his free time play Gold, Tennis, go to the beach with my Mother and my brothers.

He likes to play golf and tennis and go to the beach with my mother and my brothers in his free time.

  1. He is 5 feet 10 inches height and around 70 kgs. weight.

He is 5 feet, 10 inches tall, and his weight is around 70 kgs.

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He is 5 feet, 10 inches tall, and he weighs around 70 kgs.

  1. His personality the he has a good sense of human but he also has a shourt tempered.

He has a good sense or humor, but he also has a short temper.

  1. He is like to talk people all time.

He likes to talk to people all the time.

  1. He have 56 years old.

He is 56 years old.

  1. He is bal, and He have brown eyes.

He is bald, and he has brown eyes.

  1. My father is very funny, intelligent and very caring because he love me too much and protect for any badness.

My father is very funny, intelligent and very caring; he loves me very much and protects me from any badness.

  1. He is in Canada, but he come to the United States soon.

He is in Canada, but he will come to the United States soon.

  1. My father name is Hammersley Taylor.

My father’s name is Hammersley Taylor.